Posted by : Lilac Wren Thursday, September 20, 2012

Today's video goes in a little different direction than you're probably used to from me and I'm kind of excited by it.  It has more written story than my usual re-imaginings, so it allowed me to be more in depth and creative with the characters and plot.  Since there's more text and less edits than usual, I'm referring to this as more of a "video caption" for lack of a better term.

I've created a world where there's a link with a parallel universe. I took some liberties with the theories of quantum physics that I used (so be kind, all of you physicists out there), but I don't think I stretched the possibilities too far.

I imagine this turning into an ongoing series for me (along with my usual stuff)... as long as the response is good out there.

I'm very interested to hear your reactions to this new direction I'm taking.  Don't worry though, it probably won't be as drastic to you as it feels to me.  Please give me any feedback you have, good or bad.

When Worlds Collide
**CAUTION: Contains sexually explicit material**

Truly,
Wren

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  1. I am not one for explicit stuff, I am more about the story.

    There was more story up front, but nothing during the video. You can still use subtitles when the video is in English. Let us know what Martin is thinking while this event is going on, in subtitles.

    I can tolerate the explicit material if there is story waved throughout. That is what I liked so much about the TGtales on youtube, the story was woven throughout the video. My favorite TGtales clips are 1) Nugirl Feminization Clinic 2) Viral Vengeants 3) Boyz to Girlz 4) Becoming Female 5) TG Pagent - Part 2 Because they told an interesting story throughout the video.

    I recommend more story through the video. Either with subtitles during explicit scenes or voice overs, something to keep us interested. Otherwise it becomes an interesting premise up front, then a bunch of explicit material that I can ignore.

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    1. Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep that in mind for future works.

      Wren

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  2. Thanks for being open to feedback.

    Some examples could be when Martin spit on the guy's thing he could think "I am going to spit shine this health inspector until I see him smile."
    When Martin was bent over the kitchen prep area he could think "I have prepared meat on this counter a 100 times before, but not like this"
    Or "every time I use this counter from now on, I will think about how I was bent over it"

    The first time Martin sees the guy's thing Martin could think "Wow that guy is a lot bigger than I was, maybe I deserve this"

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  3. great storyline, but I have to say it DID need some storyline in the middle (too much upfront)

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    1. Yes, after Crusoe's similar comments, I went back and took another look at it. And I have to agree that it may have been a bit lopsided, being either prose or explicit video, but not both. For my future videos, I definitely intend to break it up a bit, although for these type of video captions, I'm sure that the majority of the story will still be in the lead-in up front. I already have a couple on the go that I'm going to rework somewhat.

      Glad you liked the storyline though.

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  4. I think they are great , love the explicit,especially when they make reference to how different the experience is from the new perspective

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  5. As usual, you continue to do a masterful job with your video selection and your added captions and edits. I do have a question, though, about the girl
    in "The Christmas Wish" video. To me, at least, she is quite beautiful with an exceptional figure, and quite lovely breasts, too. Who is she?

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    1. I found this out after the fact but the girl in "The Christmas Wish" is Sydney Moon.

      Thanks for your positive comments. I'm glad you're enjoying them.

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